Re: Giir Tracks

by **Your mother** Tue Dec 21, 2010 1:04 am

Ok, after reading all of this, I have one thing to say.

You all suck at writing.

You can not write to save yourself.

I mean come on. No one gave any reasons for their character's actions, which were all over the place and incredibly choppy.

No one even wrote for more than a paragraph.

You all should learn to RP and put some effort into it.

by **Shih-Na** Tue Dec 21, 2010 1:58 am

That may be so, but I have made a forum dedicated to RPing. I will not advertise it here, on risk that you may spammify that forum too, but I just don't try anymore. But seriously, just shut the flibble up and flibble off. Stop criticizing everything we do on here.

EDIT: Damn it Bobby. Why change the F word to flibble? That just ruins the point I was trying to get across.

by **Your mother** Tue Dec 21, 2010 2:00 am

Oh wow mate, you're so cool. You want me to "flibble off". Oh wow.

by **Shih-Na** Tue Dec 21, 2010 2:05 am

Hey, that was the &*^&ing censor lock.

by **Your mother** Tue Dec 21, 2010 2:18 am

Sorry, what does '&*^&' mean? I'm not fluent in Japanese.

by **Shih-Na** Tue Dec 21, 2010 2:24 am

No, that's not Japanese. It's most obviously multiple letters on the keyboard above each numeral. Kore ga Nippondesu.

by **Your mother** Tue Dec 21, 2010 2:30 am

I think you mean "Kore wa nipponjindesu"

lrn2Japanese.

And Japanese is meant NOT to be Phoenican.

Far out, what do they teach kids in schools these days?

by **Shih-Na** Tue Dec 21, 2010 2:32 am

I cannot learn Japanese during school, as apparently in mycountry, Principals are meant to drop every language subject to replace it with a useless subject.

by **Your mother** Tue Dec 21, 2010 2:36 am

I don't do Japanese either dumbass. There are these pretty nifty things called translators.

Or is that too big a word for you?

by **Shih-Na** Tue Dec 21, 2010 2:41 am

If I were Admin, I would IP Ban your @$$.

by **Your mother** Tue Dec 21, 2010 3:44 am

Wait, don't they give around Admin-ship to anyone who's been a good boy? Are you that pitiful that you can't even get an adminship here?

That's pretty sad mate, even for you.

by **Shih-Na** Tue Dec 21, 2010 6:17 am

They don't give Adminship to just anyone. That's not a very good accusation.

by **Leo The Awesome** Tue Dec 21, 2010 6:19 am

Ignore her she was BANNED

by **Shih-Na** Tue Dec 21, 2010 6:39 am

OK then. See? I should have Adminship, as I am on here when none of you are. You need an Admin for Northern Hemisphere (You guys) and Southern Hemisphere (Me). Then, we can take care of this stuff round the clock.

by **Leo The Awesome** Tue Dec 21, 2010 6:57 am

by **Shih-Na** Tue Dec 21, 2010 7:00 am

Yay! Thanks Leo.

by **Leo The Awesome** Tue Dec 21, 2010 7:02 am

No Prob

by **Morph Boy** Tue Dec 21, 2010 8:00 am

With the way you're acting, I'm surprised your not banned yet.

by **Leo The Awesome** Tue Dec 21, 2010 9:53 am

Who SUDK? No I Banned The Other User

by **Morph Boy** Tue Dec 21, 2010 11:11 am

I was WAY late. I meant the mother guy. I think you guys made a good decision to make Shih-Na an admin.

by **Shih-Na** Tue Dec 21, 2010 4:35 pm

I am SUDK.

by **Shih-Na** Thu Dec 23, 2010 11:06 pm

We somehow started winning the match. I was surprised when things turned in our favour. My new racket was really doint things. Then, te ball exploded on it's way towards me. "What?" I said, as I got blasted back. Then, I seen Ryo. He had a black snake crawling up his arm. It sunk into his skin, and looked like charcoal. The charcoal started spreading until it covered almost the entire (his) left side of his body. He grabbed the racket, and launched another ball at me. I say launched because, within the EXACT time he hit the ball, it smacked Hinata in the face, and bounced over and KO'd Ryo's teammate. He didn't seem to care. "Hinata, you OK?" I asked. She didn't answer. I knew she was out cold. I then proceede to launch balls at Ryo. Each one missed. "I have an idea" I said to myself.

I used the racket, and threw it at Ryo instead of the ball. Then, as he flinched to dodge the racket, I threw the ball at him, with te reaper's eye power. It hit him in the nose, and he toppled over, unconcsious. The charcoal shrunk in perimeter. It then became a snake again. I slithered up to me. I became quickly worried, and jumped out of the way. It followed me whenever I jumped backwards. Then, I ducked. It slithered right past me. "NO!" I yelled as I realized what happened. But I was too late. I turned around to see a beast. An ogre like beast, then, the muscles all shrunk and it was Hinata. But, she had pointed red eyes, and her skin was scaly and black. She roared. "Hinata? What are you doing?" I asked. She didn't answer and came up to me, clawed hand outstretched. I moved, and Hinata passed me. She roared to the sky. I seen many of the black snakes rain down from the sky. They hit the ground and slithered over the horizon. Then, the Hinata beast looked at me with an angered look. "Fight time" I quickly realized.

I ran past Hinata and picked up my racket. Then, I split the racket and the Scythe up. "There we go" I said.
I ran at Hinata and slashed the scythe multiple times. It swung quicker than usual and Hinata was cut badly. The snake slithered away, leaving a severely cut and bleeding Hinata. "No." I whispered to myself. She was barely breathing. I kneeled down into the pool of blood. "I need a doctor. Now!" I yelled to Godly Shoop. I placed my scythe over Hinata's almost lifeless body. I then pulled some of the energy out of my body and into hers. Not life energy, but just energy in general. She started breathing better, but not by much. I fell unconscious.
(Ready to change worlds now...please make there be a doctor on the next one...a reindeer doctor!!!)

by **Mr.Shoop** Fri Dec 24, 2010 8:05 am

This is getting boring, I quit. If someone else wants to tell the story go roght ahead.

by **Shih-Na** Fri Dec 24, 2010 8:12 am

by **Morph Boy** Fri Dec 24, 2010 8:52 am

Grip puts up a fire show in the sky to get Lambo's attention again.

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